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Forbidden

Corrugated fields flow through buff dry plains
Gingerly-tufts of sheep harvest bitter moors
Smudged with gorse and shrinking dry walls

They took you from me; your sweet caresses
Pressed petals faded magenta hearts-folded
Love poems-stripped; held naked to the light


Grey glass, coldly unconcerned, slides past trees
Weeping-leaves: in greyscale-a stranger’s nails
Pick up the beat. A door closes-legs move

And when the dust had settled streaked across
my face; took us out at dawn and shot us;
Slowly hacking back the flesh stitching wounds


Even the moon’s blank stare-is an envelope
slipped over dusk. Darkness pools on milk-white
skin; a thousand eyes floating in darkness

I remember night, walking hand in hand
Only the grim tightrope of reality
flickered. Slithering, falling- like a web


I lift up my hair-to slip off the mask;
Shamefaced honed to the point of a needle;
Blistered with the cotton rain and melting

Children they said and shaking their heads
Told us it was not allowed. Like swearing
and staying out late. A cup of poison…

The sky is falling little by little
A dark pool of sky, a stream, an ocean
Of all the forbidden tears in the world

9 Comments:

Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Happy Easter Everyone!!!

12:21 PM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Hey sue! Happy easter to you too :)
That was one captivating write! prolly the best of your stuff i've read till now!! Cheers :)

2:22 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Wow! What a poem!!! Summed up superbly in the last verse!!

6:43 PM  
Blogger Russell Ragsdale said...

That was absolutely fantastic, Sue! Happy Easter.

1:49 AM  
Blogger Carbanion Tolodine said...

Happy Easter too! A good one like all the others. You are a very good writer (one of the best for poems).

Bye, take care of yourself.

2:15 AM  
Blogger Russell CJ Duffy said...

and now you are compsoing mini epics. let the rest of us eat your dust. missed this at easter so have to say BELATED Happy Easter!!
x

2:33 PM  
Blogger MB said...

So dark and intense with very rich images!

7:27 PM  
Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Thank-you prmod

Pat glad you liked it

Thank-you Russel

Carba hope you got lots of eggs

CJ a mini epic?? He He, incedently anyone wishing to eat dust there's lots on the telly and shelves, I've started collecting it, but I will be happy to part with it in a good cause

8:28 PM  
Blogger ardi k said...

The images just won't stop. Love it.

1:41 AM  

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