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The Visitor

A monster came to school
Its breath was rank
Its armpits stank
Its teeth were sharp and cruel

It wore clothes of a kind
It bellowed loud
Its voice was foul
Terrified we smiled

Its fur was long and greasy
Beneath it’s nose
Looked kind of gross,
And really made us queasy

The head rushed to give greeting
He said “Meet miss!
Your teacher kids.”
Then sadly he was eaten.

10 Comments:

Blogger Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Sorry folks really busy with essays but here's a little something to keep you going till I can catch up. Can't wait, see you all soon!

10:47 PM  
Blogger EATING POETRY said...

This poem is so silly, it made me laugh! The perfect thing to eat before going to bed.

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ps. good luck with your essays.

6:30 AM  
Blogger Carbanion Tolodine said...

I hope i can make the same strange feeling to my pupils when i become a teacher.

This one make me very happy.

Bye, take care of yourself.

8:57 AM  
Blogger Amie said...

very cute poem. enjoyable.

10:56 AM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Hahaha! Nice piece! loved reading it! Best of luck with the essays! :)

3:14 PM  
Blogger Russell Ragsdale said...

Thanks Sue, we've been waiting in your welfare line. Good luck with the essays.

5:06 PM  
Blogger GEL said...

I can easily imagine the kids "gobbling" this one up! Terrific rhythm and strong words to read aloud to children. Good luck w/ those essays.

12:58 AM  
Blogger Cocaine Jesus said...

cjhfsounds like one of my teachers. she seemed to eat lkids wholesale!
good luck with those essays.

1:55 PM  
Blogger Roger Stevens said...

Wow! Great poems. Bile of embarrassment! Fab. Love this one. It should find a home in an anthology somewhere without too much bother.

3:15 PM  
Blogger NicoleBraganza said...

Giggle Giggle Snicker Laugh

7:09 AM  

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