Two Poems
Ghost Words
He died yesterday and today
And he will die again tomorrow
He is anywhere you care to imagine
Without a roof or soft words
Perhaps on these very stones
He walked taking a smooth one
And turning it in his palm
As any boy, maybe yours, might
He was probably cold
Let us believe that he was
That his feet were sore
And his soul an insubstantial shadow
Yet even this luxury he sold
For a simple thing like bread
The sort our children leave uneaten
On a clean plate that is their right
But they do not deserve
Girl
I am my mother now. Just
a girl’s careless words echo
In a hall full of anger. In a hall
with a red carpet - twin
decades ago. I slammed
the door, leaving her behind
In my helpless silence
10 Comments:
Hi all still coursed up to the eyeballs but really enjoying it and feel as if it's having a prefound affect on my writing if not my spelling - so just something to be going along with untill the holidays start
Love to all role on last week of term
Sue
xx
Very nicely done Sue and i love the poignant edge to the write! Beautifully put! Glad i came by even if its been long, your write is always a refreshing change!! :)
God Sue that was awesome!!
'Girl' made me cry!
what course are you on...its good!
hmmm... do i sense a hint of despair here???
nice work though... long time since i saw u at my blog..
These two poems had such a profound effect on me - they moved me completely. So touching and simple and beautiful.
Excellent, very moving, the effect is very dramatic, well done
just wanted to thank you for your comment on my blog...
i'm not getting much time nowadays to post or surf and that is why i have not ben able to visit your blog more often.
its been long long time ...how are you ...
These are vivid and haunting! I am deeply moved by the candor and longing I have found here. Truely beautiful Sue!
Hi Nasra, I'm fine I've just been working all hours and haven't had a moment, hope you're well too
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