No Argument

Below is the best poem I’ve ever written

It alliterates attractively

Has imagery that illuminates the page

And Metaphors that melt in the mouth

Its similes shimmer like moon beams

And its perfect punctuation pauses it,

in all the right places…..

Unfortunately I’ve written it in invisible ink,

But it’s dead good honest!


Blogger Carbanion Tolodine said...

Death is the last thing we live. All we go by a night without moonlight. We go without a sound. As we live. We go like our recollection, without crying. A last word for the lost humanity...

10:58 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I believe you!! I'm looking for my invisible writing reading glasses, they are always so hard to find.

12:30 PM  
Blogger MB said...

By that description, I can almost read it! ;-)

9:43 PM  
Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Heh! Beautiful and cleverly written!! :) Invisible ink is always beleived to leave behind a faint and peculiar smell, now i dont know why my ears cant hear that!! Nice one sue!

9:13 AM  
Blogger Ó Seasnáin said...

I like it!

7:33 PM  
Blogger Ó Seasnáin said...

p.s. Have you heard about Poetry Thursday? You might enjoy it.

7:35 PM  
Blogger iamnasra said...

its been awhile - Any news regarding the email that I sent you -

I enjoyed reading no argument so close to the heart on the passion onf poetry

6:16 AM  
Blogger Russell Ragsdale said...

Right you are, Sue. A poem so about a lemon that the paper still smels like one. Loved it!

6:50 AM  

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