No Argument
Below is the best poem I’ve ever written
It alliterates attractively
Has imagery that illuminates the page
And Metaphors that melt in the mouth
Its similes shimmer like moon beams
And its perfect punctuation pauses it,
in all the right places…..
Unfortunately I’ve written it in invisible ink,
But it’s dead good honest!
8 Comments:
Death is the last thing we live. All we go by a night without moonlight. We go without a sound. As we live. We go like our recollection, without crying. A last word for the lost humanity...
I believe you!! I'm looking for my invisible writing reading glasses, they are always so hard to find.
By that description, I can almost read it! ;-)
Heh! Beautiful and cleverly written!! :) Invisible ink is always beleived to leave behind a faint and peculiar smell, now i dont know why my ears cant hear that!! Nice one sue!
I like it!
p.s. Have you heard about Poetry Thursday? You might enjoy it.
its been awhile - Any news regarding the email that I sent you -
I enjoyed reading no argument so close to the heart on the passion onf poetry
Right you are, Sue. A poem so about a lemon that the paper still smels like one. Loved it!
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